A Million Tears
By Organized_Chaos
Stare into my eyes
As my heart grows cold
And i apologize for all the lies
I have so boldly told.
Stare into my soul
As my blood begins to spill
And remember that not everything
You see or hear can be real.
Hold my hand and help me
as my muscles begin to contract
You watch as death approaches
And i close my eyes so not to see how you react.
Your mind begins to thrive for a new home
Because without me
You will forever be alone.
For in this final hour
we will not fight
And as you lay down
You pillow will be stained with a million tears tonight.
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© 2008 Blood_Wing
Published on Monday, February 11, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Million Tears"
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A former member wrote:
nice rhythm
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A former member wrote:
I keep looking through your poetry, and I'm at LEAST very impressed with everything I read, if not totally blown away! Keep writing!!!
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, GraveFlower
(240) wrote:
wicked.......truely......im so glad that theres at least one newbie who is real, and knows how to write....
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On Thursday, February 21, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
a good start dude, nice dark feel, welcome to Dp -symph-
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On Wednesday, February 20, 2008, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
welcome to dp. nice write. boldly honest.
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A former member wrote:
BIG welcome :D hope to see more from you! I enjoyed it.
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On Monday, February 11, 2008, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
That last line sealed the fucking deal for me. Awesome. Welcome to DP indeed!
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On Monday, February 11, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
w00t! A Rhymer!!! Welcome to DP.