Abstract only because I know what it means.
By Armor for your life
"I see no ache over this."
The
value
of years
reduced to nothing
more than flattery.
The pulse I know is not the same
The pulse
I know is not the same
The pulse I know
is not the same
The pulse I know is not the same
as the west!
And from here
I could
care
less
where
the sun sets.
Spare the tongue
and spoil ears with silence,
they will grow to focus more [on you]
Oh my god! [it hurts]
Screamed but there is no echo.
So no proof I speak worth the understanding.
And deeper yet. No proof I exist.
I can't do this alone
I want to know what you know
Just look at how unconfident i am.
Staring at the ground
wondering
who will be the first to blink.
This time I'm not so fond of victory.
A first for everything.
Awards
Comments on "Abstract only because I know what it means."
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A former member wrote:
Heated...but yet vividly powerful
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A former member wrote:
great piece here.
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On Friday, September 14, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Wow! Damn . This is eerily suttle yet hard hitting in soft notes.. like a quiet demon giving warning. i love it. congrats on POD well deserved.
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On Friday, January 25, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
i loved the 'spare the tongue. spoil the ears with silence...' part. that was so perfectly said.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Mari
(419) wrote:
i like you...
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A former member wrote:
awesome.....
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
wonderful. that's all.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
This just killed me, its brilliant!-Gin