Let's reminisce

By LadyMalice

This isn't where I was last night,
but it's better than
the night before;
drunken fingers trembling
up my thighs would always
make me think of you,
and your ambitions
on cold winter mornings.

Our bare feet shivered
beneath linoleum,
and that out of the shower air
we've dreaded since childhood.
In your bedroom,
we would suffocate
beneath towels and blankets,
trying to trap the heat
as strands of wet hair
pierced my back,
and rested against your chest.

I would dream of beautiful women,
and wonder if ten years from now
"I told you so" would really mean
something more than
you were jealous
of my female friends;
I hoped that until then
would could sink into the sunrise,
and reminisce on the
half-eaten sandwiches
and baked nights
of our youth.

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© 2007 LadyMalice
Published on Tuesday, December 11, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Beautiful imagery and a lot of emotion here, a mix of love and fear that is so poignant. Loved this piece thank you for the read!

  • italianbella On Wednesday, December 26, 2007, italianbella (185)By person wrote:

    Loved this amazing write:)

  • Sketso On Wednesday, December 12, 2007, Sketso (435)By person wrote:

    Nostalgia at it's finest, both the glory and the ache.

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