BARREN HANDS

By Zhee

Dare I raise these barren hands?
That emptiness does stain.
Dare I break the shackled silence
And speak to you of pain?

Shall I lift my gaze to heaven
That is enraged at all my sins,
Or will you now make me crawl
With all the hypocritic, prostrating mannequins.

Dare I question what is mine?
When this delirious realm is yours,
For I walked with my naked soul
And they all just closed their doors.

May I open my enshrouded eyes
For ‘tis madness when malevolence leads,
See how the vultures flock above
As the crippled angle bleeds.

Dare I raise these barren hands?
That emptiness does stain.
Dare I break the shackled silence
And speak to you of pain?

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© 2007 Zheala
Published on Saturday, September 22, 2007.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Love this my friend. Glad I happened to run across you. :)

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  • urbanhumility On Saturday, September 22, 2007, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    i like every which way this poem works........perfect wording....structure......quandry.....perfect

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