Cloud Gazing

By Petra Creffield



Cloud Gazing pause reboot keep running, keep movin on keep this train a chugging keep this show on the road onwards and upwards older, wiser, still optimistic bring it all on, keep moving on pushing this life along the road to nowhere it’s a wild ride and im livin it to the full maxing it out, faxing it out nothing to lose and everything to gain live fast, die young lets get it on like all the heroes that went before jump in the deep end leave that parachute behind dance in the free fall let's get lost in this world spin in giddy circles till we fall dizzy into the damp grass of home can you hear my heart beating alive in my chest all fear is now gone I saw my death and decided to live Petra Creffield 2006

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© 2006 Petra Creffield
Published on Saturday, August 18, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Bella Butchery On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    me gazing :D loved the write attached

  • NikesRain On Saturday, August 18, 2007, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    great picture, the write a perfect counterpart.... inspirational work

  • A former member wrote: what a sublime ending; goodness.. .

  • carlosjackal On Saturday, August 18, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Good poem and the photo's wicked -Carl

  • Petra Creffield On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield (26)By person wrote:

    41 and three quarters :)

  • A former member wrote: we women folk reach ouor peaks around mid 30s ;}

  • Petra Creffield On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield (26)By person wrote:

    am obliged to say bollocks to that :)

  • A former member wrote: damn.. i thought 40 was the new 30, which some say is the old 20... so.... now... I feel much better... gem of a pic.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Is that old?

  • A former member wrote: loo.....is that OLD??? heavens NO---

  • Petra Creffield On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield (26)By person wrote:

    only in the mornings :)

  • Mylissa On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    were all old in the mornings lol. :}

  • Mylissa On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    we're

  • Mylissa On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    nope!

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    I have stamina...

  • carlosjackal On Saturday, August 18, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    27 & 11/12ths! Although quite a few people have told me they think I look about early 20s. And I once got ID'd at a club when I was 24. Made my night that did :)

  • Petra Creffield On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield (26)By person wrote:

    i got id'ed at 24on my first night out after having my second child, the bouncers asked for id my answer ' the only id i got is my stretch marks - you wanna see those?' hehe

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    I know this write by heart, even beforore I read it. Could it be that it is something kindred?

  • Petra Creffield On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield (26)By person wrote:

    maybe we should marry and make a poetry jerusalem :)

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    How old are you again?

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