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Cloud Gazing
By Petra Creffield
Cloud Gazing
pause
reboot
keep running, keep movin on
keep this train a chugging
keep this show on the road
onwards and upwards
older, wiser, still optimistic
bring it all on, keep moving on
pushing this life along
the road to nowhere
it’s a wild ride
and im livin it to the full
maxing it out, faxing it out
nothing to lose and everything to gain
live fast, die young
lets get it on
like all the heroes that went before
jump in the deep end
leave that parachute behind
dance in the free fall
let's get lost in this world
spin in giddy circles
till we fall dizzy into the damp grass of home
can you hear my heart beating
alive in my chest
all fear is now gone
I saw my death and decided to live
Petra Creffield 2006
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© 2006 Petra Creffield
Published on Saturday, August 18, 2007.
Filed under:
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724)
wrote:
me gazing :D loved the write attached
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
great picture, the write a perfect counterpart.... inspirational work
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A former member wrote:
what a sublime ending; goodness.. .
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, carlosjackal
(3017) wrote:
Good poem and the photo's wicked -Carl
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield
(28) wrote:
41 and three quarters :)
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A former member wrote:
we women folk reach ouor peaks around mid 30s ;}
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield
(28) wrote:
am obliged to say bollocks to that :)
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A former member wrote:
damn.. i thought 40 was the new 30, which some say is the old 20... so.... now... I feel much better... gem of a pic.
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Is that old?
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A former member wrote:
loo.....is that OLD??? heavens NO---
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield
(28) wrote:
only in the mornings :)
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
were all old in the mornings lol. :}
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
we're
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
nope!
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I have stamina...
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, carlosjackal
(3017) wrote:
27 & 11/12ths! Although quite a few people have told me they think I look about early 20s. And I once got ID'd at a club when I was 24. Made my night that did :)
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield
(28) wrote:
i got id'ed at 24on my first night out after having my second child, the bouncers asked for id my answer ' the only id i got is my stretch marks - you wanna see those?' hehe
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I know this write by heart, even beforore I read it. Could it be that it is something kindred?
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Petra Creffield
(28) wrote:
maybe we should marry and make a poetry jerusalem :)
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
How old are you again?
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