Damn Your Eyes

By Eric

Tearing me inside
dreams fade out of mind
if all is lost
was that the cost?



What will become
never wanted to be
what I've become
never want to be
never want to be

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© 2007 Eric Scott Diaz
Published on Saturday, June 30, 2007.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Friday, August 12, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Nice! I love it!!! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: beautiful!!!! just amazing Scholar

  • Mylissa On Tuesday, July 31, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    I felt this fell from painful ink...remarkable.

  • A former member wrote: Very deep and meaningful

  • dark_mistress On Sunday, July 1, 2007, dark_mistress (19)By person wrote:

    So few words...and yet it is filled with so much

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, June 30, 2007, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    this touched base with me.......deep.......with so few words.................well done

  • Mari On Saturday, June 30, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    aw that situation is pretty gay to the max.

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