Sunday Morning

By ONEANDLONELY

Opening my eyes
light makes them react.
Not alone with change.
Superficial feelings the canvas,
lay under the artisan's brush.
Vulnerability, melt desire into color.
Sweet scent rising
like baked sugar, open the file.
The closest distance between two points;
a straight line to my soul.
Closer than touch.
Familiarity in the overstuffed chair.
Seduction in every atom.

Begin,

"The ritual!"

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Copyright 2004 ONEANDLONELY
Published on Sunday, August 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Err0r On Saturday, October 29, 2005, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    I especially love 'Vulnerability, melt desire into color.' You're so vivid with your writes. :) This one isn't an exception.

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, September 4, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    Very good

  • Zhee On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    i like the way you write.. this was wonderfully done...

  • A former member wrote: I like how you stimulate multiple senses in this work. Unique peice. Appreciated. +T.P.U+

  • A former member wrote: A poet's words are painted in blood. ~Shane~

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