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My parental needs
By Cwn Annwn
I need someone to tell me its all ok.
Someone to wipe my tears away.
Someone to offer that hand to squeeze.
Someone to pick me up.
When I fall on my knees.
Someone to tell me I've done the most.
Someone who wont brag or boast.
Someone who might hold me close.
Because the tears now just seem to flow.
I can't stand to watch either of you go.
I can't stand to have you look at me,
Cry, yell and scream at me,
Just because your miserable...doesnt mean I have to be.
All the time you'd spend is now just cheating and trying to make amend.
Did you think of me and dad...while with those other men?
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Copyright 2004 Noctem Aeternus
Published on Saturday, May 29, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, bloody LOVEly
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...i cant come up with anything smart to say so im just gunna say that i loved it because its deep. yeah...+_+
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On Sunday, May 30, 2004, -Oz-
(134) wrote:
your full of shit, you know that, you said this was BAD....wtf were you on when you said that??!! omg it just pulls you in line after line, and the last line just pulls you that little extra to make you cry......
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On Sunday, May 30, 2004, -Oz-
(134) wrote:
........*goes and curls up in the corner with a teddy bear and cries* -Oz-
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A former member wrote:
wow. I really enjoyed this. it brought back a whole lot of memories. but instead my father cheats and my mother knows but allows him to do it*weird*
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A former member wrote:
i know how you feel...my faimily is just the same...but my dad does it to...i pity you...yet then again...its a sick way a life that is very commen...£Haunted£
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A former member wrote:
that...oh my god..that just nailed me to the floor. i cant believe someone could do this to their family..tear it apart. this was so fucking sad. angry even. beautiful work.
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