Trepidation

By aXe FactoR

The twilight broke through and sheds light to the tainted soul of hers.
Sitting in a corner, she's adrift in the vast abyss of space and time.
Combing her long raven tresses with her fingers, she held up a few stray locks and took a whiff.
Closing her eyes, she inhaled... exhaled...
Adorned on her was her favorite cloak to keep her from the bitter coldness.
Somehow today, it resembled a canvas of pain, laden on her weak vessel.
The chilling iciness bit into her rips, as she began nibbling her nails.
Nibbling... biting... chewing...
Blood ran down her hands to her elbows and she continued chewing right into her flesh.
She didn't stop, continuing in her sadistic slay, deriving pleasure from pain.
The tips of her fingers, stained crimson with her own cruor.

Overwhelmed by thoughts of her abhorrence, she asphyxiates.
She stares at him all laid out inanimate in front of her.
Slowly, she reaches out a hand, caressing his cheek.
Using her fingers, she traced his naked body with a featherlike touch
To the point where she had emasculated him.
His penis all shriveled, stale, torrid lying beside him.
Looking at its pathetic state, she gave a heinous giggle
He could never use it to delude her again.
































She lays near death at this time, resting her head on his chest.
A sight of her wrists, split open in carmine lacerations
As she mouths a last song.

A lullaby of betrayal

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Copyright 2004 Psuedo_Me
Published on Saturday, May 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Blood of Winter On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    Okay that is definetely the first time I have read about a severed penis on here, awesome piece...

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Lynaes (878)By person wrote:

    Haunting, disturbing and strangely, satisfyingly enchanting.. An excellent write, made me shiver!

  • sixsixnine On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, sixsixnine (488)By person wrote:

    WOW!!! this was extreamly cool! love the whole piece *669*

  • Savannah On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Savannah (234)By person wrote:

    this will definately give me nightmares. thanks :)

  • missanthropic On Saturday, May 22, 2004, missanthropic (26)By person wrote:

    you begin with light and eat away until only the darkest shade remains...i trembled afterwards...thank you

  • gracefullytorn On Saturday, May 22, 2004, gracefullytorn (62)By person wrote:

    this is really disturbing....fuck yea!

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