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My Undying Love
By AnaMia92
Tonight as I lay on this cold wet ground, staring at the stars above. I remember our undying love. We loved like our lives depended on it. And in a way it did. We were each others life line. So why did you leave me? How could you put me in such pain? We were supposed to be each others ever after. So how do i do that now??? I'm starving for you here. I'm screaming as the rain pours down...screaming for you as the angels pour their tears over us tonight. I'm clinging to this freshly dug dirt mound....with my undying love...for my life line. My ever after......
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2016, RoseTheBrokenHearted
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wrote:
"We loved like our lives depended on it. And in a way it did" A line, so excellently written and relatable. One day, your heart shall be in it, to win it. Cheers
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2016, AnaMia92
(12) wrote:
Thanks so much
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On Tuesday, March 29, 2016, tmanzano
(210) wrote:
It starts as mere melancholy memories, and then slams the heart into a deep misery of questions that even attacks the lost. I had to stop and let the riveting imagery of "angels pour their tears over us tonight" sink in to the causing effect of inclusion to the lost... Well done here.... Am I the only one who see this??
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2016, AnaMia92
(12) wrote:
Thanks so much..... I'm glad you seen what I was trying to do here 😊😊
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