Comments by Loneal
- "I've read this over several times and can pick up the angst in it, but I'm getting confused on who's saying what. *chuckle* Maybe I'm trying to read into it too much? :) This seems like a snapshot out of a bigger story. Great job! :) ~L/S.D. "
Posted by Loneal on "Father and Son" by Ulfric
- "*grin* Intersting take on this very basic instinct. ;) Once again, well written! ~L/S.D."
Posted by Loneal on "Siren Song" by Ulfric
- "The mood you create here is very warm, comfortable, and peaceful. Well done. :) ~L/S.D."
Posted by Loneal on "Renewing" by Ulfric
