Comments by KittyStryker

  • "i like the fact that this basically says "life sucks. but it's not all bad." don't get caught up in rhyme- your rhythm would be better, methinks, if you weren't trying to do an aa bb scheme."
    Posted by KittyStryker on "Discomfiting Twilight" by nightshade
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