Comments by darkendomme
- "I could see tiny breaths of cold air in a black and white scene, seeing little toes tucking beneath blankets safety....Story telling should draw the reader into the room and its era....and as always, you did :)) Cheers Dan! keep the rounds ah comin!!"
Posted by darkendomme on "The Caretaker" by dwells
- "Everything about this is brilliant !! Each word created for each excellent sentence and rhyme.. you even set the scene for your audience. It played in my mind like a movie. I'm in awe as always. Definite and great study guide for me. Inspiration crack!! ;) Thank you Sensei Dan. "
Posted by darkendomme on "When Guns Go Silent" by dwells
