Comments by A_Puppet_Show
- "There we go, all of the tired comments are out the window. You got it ^_~ A very good poem, and I cant point out enough how this is diffrent from the first ive read of you. Lets just say that your track is smooth. It will be. -Tiger-"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Pier Glass" by Six-Out
- "Want to point out that it freaked me out to have writen my new short poem maybe at the same time you wrote this. Explanation is in the title. Maybe it does, explain I mean. Maybe it dosnt say shit of what I meant it to.... Okey now I am realy done.
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Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Cotton" by Six-Out
- "Ask not why; "why's" will not explain why.... So there ... done. I enjoyed chooking on this. Tiger"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Cotton" by Six-Out
- "Well yea, trying to get back on track here. Yes, this made me think of how I despise "pocket wisdom" and "poetic justice" and want to kill it, to chooke on new things that are just as gross."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Cotton" by Six-Out
- "*chooking on cotton truths* urgh ... "Harvest the truth" <--- I may hate that line more then any other. Okey it is in on a top 2 I think. First would be "I remember the days" ...and if its a "my" instead of "The" there, then its out of category.."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Cotton" by Six-Out
- "And you do that often, and that make me often read these both to dig and to laugh and to simply enjoy. I think that is what your poetry is often in my eyes. Tiger"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Livid Instancies" by Six-Out
- "It is my defence against your straightforwardness; as I often find that I dig too deep in finding errors, especialy when talented poets make paper shrinks with wonderful words."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Livid Instancies" by Six-Out
- "Good stuff. I wondered if you mean, ones own life riped or the life of one close. I like to wonder, and I like the serene feeling that gave the rest of the poem. I sat thinking also, "I am in love with life, what is this man babling about" "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Livid Instancies" by Six-Out
