Comments by Ravenblade
- "I love that your poetry feels like it should be read slow, and emphasized in certain points that you seem to break off so as to draw attention to them. Some very nice lines that were pleasant to see and screamed in my mind as beautiful as literature may ever be...thank you for sharing."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Some Sort of Lovely (revised)" by Dei
- "I can't begin to find words for this, but if I had to I would say that this flowed nicely, and the pictures you paint with your words feel almost at peace until you twist it away at the end. Your yin should have yanged..."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "Your use of imagery shows how beautiful your words are...I wish I could describe visions in such detail...keep up the great work"
Posted by Ravenblade on "My name is Perfection." by Dei
