Comments by Ravenblade
- "well it reads fairly easily. I don't know if I can put this to music though. still, lyric writing is so technical; and a challenge. It appears well done, although you missed the "L" on lungs in the beginning"
Posted by Ravenblade on "Debris" by HeadpatSlut
- "I like the idea that you have an idea what this sounded like in your head. I can't stand reading things in all capitals, but otherwise it was definitely perceived as an angry piece. "
Posted by Ravenblade on "Breaking Point" by HeadpatSlut
- "Very nicely done. I think there were just 2 stanzas to me that felt coerced. Everything else flowed seamlessly and kept on task...deep message, and sorry for the pain experienced in loss. Nothing brings them back quite like fond memories."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Loving Nightmare" by HeadpatSlut
- "very nicely written, loved the visualisations and descriptive coverage of it all, and the floow was smooth. Great write indeed."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Elven Minstrel" by HeadpatSlut
