Comments by Railway_Butterfly

  • "i must have read this many more times than i'd realised.. it's certainly been a while, but as i was reading this again it literally felt so familiar i could've sworn i'd written it myself if i didn't know better. i hope you realise how beautiful this piece is, i can honestly say i will never forget it."
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
  • "and secondly because I came here wanting to let this piece spill over me.. and now I have, I feel the need to tell you again how beautiful and moving this piece is.. but I don't think theres any more I could say that I haven't already.."
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
  • "I hate that I was the last person to comment on this. For two reasons. One.. because it should be read by every single member on this site. And more. Over and over.."
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
  • "'you're eyes like fluttering doves at dawn's rise'...the structure you've used here appears somewhat different to your usual style,though theres something about this that still makes it clear that this is your work...if that makes sense...just something a"
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
  • "...'so perfect in your sleep weeping tears like glass against the plae of your cheek you dreamed for me.as the waves licked the sand and somewhere over the azure abyss where the sky meets the sea..it waits'...wow....and I thought the ending was fantastic."
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "vintageviolence" by slow.burn.star
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