Comments by inhisbelly
- "The second stanza made me laugh heartily. That _is_ always the line, isn't it? I love exploring the nature of casual relationships... Observing some of the nuances, while still protecting most of the mystique. This piece did that well. Thanks for sharing. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Noone really wants to know" by Dejected_Worth
- "Something about this turned my stomach as well. It made me think of broken families and small towns and tornadoes and weeping in bathroom stalls. Now that I say that, I'm reminded of the movie Gummo (a screwed up indie flick with disturbing storylines and spanish metal). I am simultaneously intrigued and off put by the stream of feelings and images this evoked. Interesting work. Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "I met my mom at arbys" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "I enjoyed the hopeful tone and conclusion of this piece. The archaic language was also appreciated, only because you executed it with a fluid kind of precision and grace. Thank you for sharing this. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "On the Turning of the Wind" by BetaWolfinVA
