Comments by steuss
- ""And I wonder if the darkness deepens
Or the wind pauses to add my keening
To its wail" The faltering confidance in this poem held me avidly. I'm enjoying both reading this and attmepting to understand all of its intricacies. Well Done!"
Posted by steuss on "Give Me This Treachery" by cre
- "Such great thoughts, and the blur of what is real is such a vivid almost dreamlike illusion. Very well done!"
Posted by steuss on "Reality" by cre
- "i so enjoy this. Despite the loss of innocence.. still, a great read with insight to how experiance changes you."
Posted by steuss on "The Sun That Morning" by cre
- "The last stanza is just beautifully written. This made me think, and then fill with a melancholic joy."
Posted by steuss on "Every Sky In My Mind" by cre
