Comments by Jonas

  • "with the correct intersections of time space public awareness and sentiment this piece would easily have the bouyancy to float into immortality in so far as humanity's printed pages can reckon it. my understanding of the world is now more than it was."
    Posted by Jonas on "gold bars and cotton sheets" by capt_funguy
  • "a broken and imperfect world... the vernacular you created illustrates your intentions subtly. beauty in the lack of. "
    Posted by Jonas on "born of" by capt_funguy
  • "wow. as purr said 'wordmotion' excellent... i get the sense of the monstrosity, gangling hugeness of sorrow, of the truths in the world... 'wishy want...etc' is exceptional; like a quarter in the jar of a junkie don't do much good... if you dig. "
    Posted by Jonas on "errors in compassion" by capt_funguy
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