Comments by Cantara
- "This is .... P|O|V That is the only thing I can say that does any justice to what you have expressed here. The only worthy comment I can leave."
Posted by Cantara on "event horizon" by mikeygreenleaf
- "I read it now with clear vision. I see your meaning and message that lay hidden within. I'm glad I asked for insight. All the jewels within these words are revealed. How sharply cut with such precision the words chosen. This is a gleaming write."
Posted by Cantara on "The Pharisee" by mikeygreenleaf
- "I see it quite the opposite "gaze through institutions site" it's a command of intent to filter out all the indoctrinated bull shit and peel off everything you thought you knew
.... until you are at the core of your authentic self. The divine. We are our own creators. We choose. And this is what you have chosen. My heart wants to burst at your humanity Mikey ♡"
Posted by Cantara on "The Lightworkers " by mikeygreenleaf
- "Of course it was intentional. Reading it over now, I see more you've taken and twisted around... I didn't realise how well you know that book."
Posted by Cantara on "Unyielding Drought " by mikeygreenleaf
- "Wow mikey I don't know if you did this intentionally, but you contradicted "my yoke is light..." that's so clever Mr. This is quite an intense writing because of the issues raised and so complex in nature to be "de weeding" the truth from the "lies". A very difficult state to explain and express. You did it very well. This is a truly wonderful artistic expression of inner exploration. "
Posted by Cantara on "Unyielding Drought " by mikeygreenleaf
- "I loved your consistent meter. You didn't skip a beat. Disassociating from the sheep... splendid. Only good can come from being disillusioned, no matter how mad you think you're going or how upside down or wrong way round or conflicting and confusing it seems. Transformation is painful. "
Posted by Cantara on "Sheepish" by mikeygreenleaf
- "Holy... oooo my.... Mikey.... This is perfect! Perfect! That's all I can say. You KNOW. You UNDERSTAND. You SEE. I Absolutely love the way you wrote this. Seemed to come to you with such easy. It's yours you know. You own this experiment and knowledge. It's specific to you. This is just incredible on so many levels. There are two others I would love to send this to. I know they'd love to read it, if you wouldn't mind? It all came together. They all have their part their piece in you. I can't express how happy I am for you ♡"
Posted by Cantara on "Of Wolves and Serpents" by mikeygreenleaf
- "A cynical, critical angle to look at the nature of poets and poetry? With sinister motives and the ability to influence our readers to think and feel what we want? Are we egotistical, self centered manipulators?"
Posted by Cantara on "The Cliffhangers Puzzle" by mikeygreenleaf
- "I love the multiple meaning in this. Literal layered between metaphorical. The sound is music I enjoyed listening to while dancing down the lines. I reached out as I heard you in these words. You are always with me. Know that. Talented writing my friend, as always. "
Posted by Cantara on "Color Scheme (Color Blind)" by mikeygreenleaf
- "Mikey, I love this. The metaphor is brilliant; whimsically carrying the innocent, foolish essence of falling in love. Really romantic Mr ♡ "
Posted by Cantara on "Moonshine" by mikeygreenleaf
- "Honesty and authenticity to others and ourselves. Indeed Mr greenleaf. What great undercurrents flow below the surface giving your rhythm and rhyme exciting direction. "
Posted by Cantara on "The Cliffhangers Puzzle" by mikeygreenleaf
- "Just one more. She is a woman you have compared to a bird. You are describing your relationship with her. She's beautiful and sometimes mad or irrational. She is a vocal type not afraid to use it and is very expressive. You have to tread carefully around her. She's dominant and you're whipped!"
Posted by Cantara on "Who Is She?" by mikeygreenleaf
- "SHE is the spirit sacred in you. SHE is you connectedness to all and everything around you but especially the natural world through your soul consciousness. SHE is the song sung from your heart in celebration of embracing all of life; love, pain, suffering, peace. SHE sings riddles you will never understand because they are not of the intellect but spirit. You can't understand or explain. Only know and feel. It's interesting that you chose a female bird. Maybe subconsciously you have a Goddess/Mother/Matriarchal belief system.... woman as creator of life and nurturing Mother... This is such fun! But I'm getting carried away. I have others but want to give someone else a chance too. "
Posted by Cantara on "Who Is She?" by mikeygreenleaf
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