Comments by Cantara
- "Such sadness these few lines brought me. The quick pace and cropped length gives it and angry and bitter undertow."
Posted by Cantara on "Closet Space" by lupus tenebrae
- "☆Oh my word! I wrote something about the very same thing! Completely different in style to yours of course but wow! What a coincidence. Mine is titled Writing to the Sounds of Dead Can Dance, if you are interested in having a read. This was a great write as always!☆"
Posted by Cantara on "Otherworldly Folk Song" by lupus tenebrae
- "I love your form here. It's so well worked out. 6 and 7 syllables per line. 2 lines in 4 stanzas. The first linr stating the object then the metaphor. The second line the verb and it's effect on you. And that structure is built in for stanzas 1 And 3. 2 and 4 name the verb at the end of line one. Sorry for this tedious comment but I found this careful planning impressive. Gosh I could just keep going but I don't want to bore everyone. Great poem. Makes for interesting analysis. "
Posted by Cantara on "Web of Circuitry" by lupus tenebrae
- "That is just a beautiful state of mind. It's takes special sensitivity to pick up on subtleties that go unnoticed by most. If you create your own inspiration instead of waiting for it to come to you that is majick and you will always be full, may you never run dry. An inspirational piece. Thank you. "
Posted by Cantara on "Poems Just Waiting to Happen" by lupus tenebrae
- "It's very cryptic... I understood it completely differently to what you explained. I thought you were talking about how powerful our words can be, especially the words of poets. They can create and destroy, build up or break down what ever we choose to write about. "
Posted by Cantara on "A Poem Whisperer" by lupus tenebrae
- "They are just cheating themselves of the experience and satisfaction that comes from creating some thing original and personally meaningful. "
Posted by Cantara on "Stolen Poetry" by lupus tenebrae
