"you rock... that last stanza is an image no one could come close to. call that original sin... your wording is intense.... Sue" Posted by Mute Serenade on "Tear your web away" by AshtrayDirt
"your poetry makes me feels as though every hint of air is gone... and i am gasping to have your glamour.... Sue" Posted by Mute Serenade on "Untitled" by AshtrayDirt
