Comments by Sorrowful Jester
- "I'll have to read again every new work of mine that I have published. After all, I always find something to add, revome, correct, in case you notice more of those errors you mentioned, please mention them in the comments section. A comment such as this coming from someone such as yourself means a lot :) I have to scroll down my facebook page and find more of my work. I've written a lot of stuff lately. I think most are not good. This one I do like (the idea), but it needs a lot of work. On the other hand, I don't intend to add much more. I just feel that many verses, diverse from logic way too much for my taste. A sheet of paper isn't blank if it has lines, I guess. It's just that sometimes, I may be even sleeptyping, but I feel inspired and I keep typing. Then, after I read with a clear mind, I notice all the logical, syntactical, grammatical, orthographic, et cetera errors :/ "
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Everything I Needed" by Sorrowful Jester
- "Although, now that I read it quickly (without my contact lenses though), I'm not sure if syntactical errors (not the grammatical ones though probably) were made on purpose. I've become a fan of a phenomenal writer, who writes like one of my favorite mathematicians \ philosophers \ strategists \ polymath"
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Donating Love" by Sorrowful Jester
- "Grammar, syntax, typos... Yes, I just had an idea, and thought it would be nice to get some feedback, then lost my phone was stolen, and my hard drive failed me. Like I did something special to it. I throw it on the ground all the time :P So reinstalling an operating system made me unable to access my Google account where I had my OneNote password. So I was lost for a month so. I had no password to any of my accounts. Good comment. I should pay a visit to all of the recent stuff I've uploaded. Almost all of them are work in progress. Especially "poems" (?), recently I write down thoughts, without rereading a verse twice :( Just ideas, but I could work on them. Thanks for leaving a comment. Interesting? Hmm...A bigger reason to read it, correct it, et cetera. We can't totally set aside logic, grammar, syntax, et cetera in the name of poetic licence. Being freeform is weird enough to call it poetry."
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Donating Love" by Sorrowful Jester
- "Are you TattooGoddess? I'm glad you're back if this is you. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. It's why I write, if people weren't enjoying reading my work, I'd keep them where I keep most of most my work, my e-journal."
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Map Made of Tears" by Sorrowful Jester
- "I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Not one of my favorites, at least until I get back to it to work on it some more, but I like the general theme. I began writing as a means of self-improvement, Nowadays, I write just to entertain, make people sympathize with the heroes of each poem, and to educate to the best of my abilities."
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Made-up Balloon" by Sorrowful Jester
- "Did you by any chance get inspired by Johnny Mnemonic? Maybe you should watch that movie. You poem has many things in common, in my humble opinion. I want to give it a 10, but I better wait until I assimilate it, digest it."
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "...Tendrils of the Storm" by SolApathy
- "I love, but saying just that is not befitting to this. I should write a critique, alas, I have not much time. I will return, read it a couple dozen times and write something better than "I love it"."
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "...Tendrils of the Storm" by SolApathy
- "My only quirk is being a big fan of metaphors & symbolisms. Although there are many well hidden, I'd like even more, especially some for those willing to read a poem more than a dozen of times. I hope that stars and your realization, are a metaphor. Do not answer that.... Magic :)"
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Falling Stars" by Chelsey Elaine
- "To know the full truth is dull, there's no magic in that. Magic's not knowing.. magic's wondering about how, what and where. So I get the feeling. I'm afraid to do many thing, because I'm afraid magic is going to fade. I love it."
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Falling Stars" by Chelsey Elaine
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