Comments by girlafraid
- ""five second eye fucks"...I had to read this twice, it was so simple and complicated...I loved every minute, and every second glance. "
Posted by girlafraid on "non-point" by missanthropic
- "your quick glances and darting eyes are fooled
by self reflections-what a powerful line...this made me think of seeing ghosts out of the corner of my eye...yet feeling incredibly alone...love your work, if i haven't already said that a million times..."
Posted by girlafraid on "kaleidoscope" by missanthropic
- "this is incredible work, once again...extremely vivid imagery and interesting symbolism...i'm always glad to see your name on the new works list, you never disappoint :)"
Posted by girlafraid on "not like the others" by missanthropic
- "sighing as she succumbs to sorrow-there is a deep, heavy sadness here, even at the beginning...something terrible was destined to happen..."
Posted by girlafraid on "lamb chops" by missanthropic
- "with a multiplicitous fury
disrupting my tranquil autonomy-this line blew me away...what a horrifying tale you have woven here...expertly crafted to place me in your bed, and in your mind...wonderful work, once again"
Posted by girlafraid on "forty winks" by missanthropic
- ""and a back like Atlas’
upon which to carry my burdens"-this line holds me..I love the form, and the last stanza brings the separation of all the pieces together..."
Posted by girlafraid on "the trinity of self" by missanthropic
- "oh man this is good..."the atrophic attention whore
running back in my red heels" excellent, excellent...so frantic...love this
"
Posted by girlafraid on "three a's" by missanthropic