Comments by cre
- "I liked this . . it has such a serene flow to it . . I can completely picture someone speaking these words as an earnest prayer . . nice write."
Posted by cre on "My prayer" by unusual_blood
- ""merry go round" feeling, the slightly out of control, spinning wildly feeling . . it was more of an experience than something simply read. Really, really nice write here. Good job."
Posted by cre on "Merry-Go-Round" by unusual_blood
- "I really like this . . at first when I was reading it I was thinking it could have been broken down into more than one poem because of the way it seems to change structure and point . . but I soon realize this really just adds to the whole "merry go roun"
Posted by cre on "Merry-Go-Round" by unusual_blood