Comments by metaphormachine

"Hm, Ruby, intensively written! W/ many emotions ... which jump me towards ... directly in my face ... if I am not careful. The last 5 years?! Well, I think to know who you mean ... if it so, does it show many more explorations of your personal being & life ... if I have not completely lost my belly feeling ... my mind & sanity ... is it for me pretty clear who to blame is. I like your power, your feminine energy ... also w/ in your poetic words & lines ... but this I have written to you so many times ... even though I probably can not to often enough these statements might write ... & I want it not often enough writing ... Your female expression impresses me! Again & again ... I will read more ... of you ... soon."
Posted by metaphormachine on "I Blame You!!!!" by RubyXero

"A flowing story ... created as a poem ... I like the parts with the dialoges, the conversation ... in a poem ... in the verses ... good idea! More of her ... soon ... :) "
Posted by metaphormachine on "The Solitary Climb" by RubyXero