Comments by purr_verse
- "First draft? Now, THIS is rhyme. Take a bow. And this --> "oh, her tears they keep falling /
the winds whip the sea /
and the siren is calling /
she's calling for me /" - magnificent."
Posted by purr_verse on "The Sailor's Lament" by RhymeBound
- "*three cheers* for marvellous metre and syllabic cadence, all while delivering this wonderful and enrapturing story. Manywelcomes to dp; excellent write."
Posted by purr_verse on "The Siren's Lament" by RhymeBound
