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Comments by stormtalk

"There is a certain sadism in the enjoyment of reading poetry about others' torment... how interesting... and nice write. The disease-called-love part started out a bit cliche, but your dissection of it fixed that."
Posted by stormtalk on "untitled" by fucken_ke_ke

"The simpler language here helped this work focus on the painful content. "The sky just keeps getting closer" was great, and I liked the progression of heart-emotions. It felt like it was missing something, though. I'm not sure what."
Posted by stormtalk on "the strange, yet familiar feeling of asphixiation." by fucken_ke_ke

""All the colors we spilled a million yesterdays" was striking, and "so give it to me beautiful" was a masterful change of pace; a bona fide verbal slap. Lovely poetic rant you have here!"
Posted by stormtalk on "the hairline fracture to your skull leaves a nice picture of..." by fucken_ke_ke

"It needs a little proofreading (crucifixion, permanent, asphyxiation), but, other than that, it has the air and confidence of a polished work, a horrifying birth of poetic wisdom!"
Posted by stormtalk on ".love is the holiest damnation." by fucken_ke_ke

"This was a good surprise - it's always nice to see a poet who's new here and who doesn't write forced rhymes about cutting and suicide. Your word use at the end was especially enjoyable."
Posted by stormtalk on ".love is the holiest damnation." by fucken_ke_ke

"The title reminds me of the song "Zen and the fine art of smashing everything in this room." Good song. Good write, too - although I'm not sure how much I like the repetition. Hummm."
Posted by stormtalk on ""a lesson in the fine art of smashing colored tiles."" by fucken_ke_ke

"In-fucking-credible."
Posted by stormtalk on "holding out is so overrated" by fucken_ke_ke

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