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"a lesson in the fine art of smashing colored tiles."
By fucken_ke_ke
make a mosaic out of my face.
this is gonna be a long night.
"a lot of things exist in our heads,
that don't exist in the real world."
we don't exist in the real world.
was there ever a point in time,
when you felt the thrill of being real?
the heart-pounding, tingling in your fingers real.
not the logical, thought out real.
the i wouldn't trade this for the world real.
the i couldn't live without this moment real.
this, right here?
it's that kind of real.
it's the i've never felt more alive kind of real.
the make a mosaic out of my face,
and i promise i'll love it kind of real.
this is gonna be a long night.
our blood will mix,
our sweat will mix,
our tears will mix.
in this moment, we are infinate.
we are invincible.
we are immortal.
this is gonna be a long night.
this is gonne be a real night.
we are going to live tonight.
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Copyright 2004 kmr
Published on Friday, November 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, stormtalk
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wrote:
The title reminds me of the song "Zen and the fine art of smashing everything in this room." Good song. Good write, too - although I'm not sure how much I like the repetition. Hummm.
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On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
this is awesome. your imagery is original and beautiful. well done.
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A former member wrote:
"the make a mosaic out of my face,
and i promise i'll love it kind of real." there's a immediate link between feeling real, and feeling truely free in your life.this peom describes that so well.
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A former member wrote:
interesting.........
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