Comments by stormtalk
- "Hey, cool. This has a stream-of-counsciousness feel to it, but with a well thought-out flow. The only part I think doesn't quite fit is the last line... other than that, awesome. Don't let them take your soul... and kick them in the nuts when they try!"
Posted by stormtalk on "Conform" by Anoblechicken
- "Cleverly done... good cutting poems are rare, and I can't say I like the idea of cutting, but this is definitely a good poem. Reminds me of a version of that Christmassy song with the doves... but more from a Nighmare Before Christmas perspective."
Posted by stormtalk on "10 single edged razor blades" by Anoblechicken
- "Hahaha, this is awesome. You have a mind for the foul. You're a good writer and you seem like a cool person... on my fav's list you go!"
Posted by stormtalk on "The Bathroom" by Anoblechicken
- "then stay away from ecstasy. Cumulative brain damage is not a good plan, not to mention that you're missing out on a lot of better things. Ecstasy gives you the feeling of a beautiful revelation, but without the revelation. It's like lying to yourself."
Posted by stormtalk on "Drugs" by Anoblechicken
- "The beginning of this is rather clever... seems that "ecstasy" could mean drugs, thoughts, or both. If it's drugs, though... "
Posted by stormtalk on "Drugs" by Anoblechicken
- "It's almost impossible to write ABAB without some of them sounding forced... in the future, try free verse a little, it tends to have fun results. This poem is good stuff, though. The first stanza is particularly well-written... and too familiar."
Posted by stormtalk on "My own disaster" by Anoblechicken
