Comments by Melancholic VIncent
- "Dr. Grim. Genius! All the poem is superb, I perceived it as this being addressed to Death, Grim Reaper. It was how I perceived it and I enjoyed it. It's a new concept of talking about Death. Really well conceived."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Screaming Melody" by RubyXero
- "Poetry is a way of expressing oneself, but it takes a poet to understand a poet. Foolish people can't understand it. Well, i guess you're free to share things here. Everyone here got his burden, so we all understand other people's burdens as well. Please, see my other work. "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
- "I don't know but, the initial part where you talk about poseidon and waters, might be symbolizing the mother's womb, tranquility and safety, and then you talk about the struggle of birth, when ariving to this world, we are taken out of our initial habitat and therefore we struggle to adapt to this new world where everything changes. And i think that all the misery of this world is also implied in there.
Good poem :) "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Tear Stained Smiles" by RubyXero
- "When I first read, I thought it was about love loss, only then i read what you said, and realise it was about the death of a friend. But isn't friendship a kind of love too? Death is a ghastly business.
I have only read it once, but it seems that you punish yourself about being happy once, as if you felt like you didn't deserve it, so when this tragic accident happened, you felt something crushing on you and thought: what a fool i was to be happy. I don't know, i may be wrong."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on " Places, Everybody!!!" by RubyXero
