Comments by ruthless48

  • "oh my hangover head has been on this ghost ship~thank you for such a concise write! love the line: "the water isn't cold - if I can't feel it" ! please save some of your vital forces to continue building the scaffolding we need to hang our hats on in the universe. You are much more than dark poetry~you are dark matter! The 83% of structure to the glittering galaxies. I really feel people are divided like cosmic matter. All the attention goes to the supernovae and constellation's concrete wonders. boring~obvious. Much more to be admired: the dark entities that hold those wonders in place throughout time. The poets, who chafe and curse the reality into this star struck life, and when it is too much intergalactic bling, we can make it all disappear with our black hole pen ink in the unlight of our true day. "
    Posted by ruthless48 on "empty ships. [lost hope in a halo]" by Six-Out
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