"good point, don't pass up any opportunities, we don't get that many. in the 1st line of the last stanza, 'are' should be 'our'... " Posted by FadedBlues on "-Finished (time's flying by)" by gearhead
"...this is very well delivered. symbolic: for those w/a cactus heart, & those others w/a tumbleweed spirit... " Posted by FadedBlues on "Cactus & Tumbleweed" by gearhead
"...the problem is, the future slips away while you're forgetting the past..." Posted by FadedBlues on "forget the past" by gearhead