Thinking Of You
By gearhead
I don't know how i feel, my mind seems to blur
All of these
thoughts, these thoughts of her
I find myself staring,
theres a wall in my head
All is blocked, tattered and webbed
I have this feeling, she cares after all
But i
cant stop thinking, something is wrong
I am here to listen,
her stories so sad
How could some one do this, to a women
like that
I want to protect her, but she hasn't let me
in
What can i do, i wana be more than friends
The beauty of her smile, hides a life time of pain
Taking
her hand, theres so much to gain
I don't know how i feel,
but i cant lie
I want her with me, by my side
These feeling's i have, built up inside
I have told her
this, only one time
Shes all i can think about, always
on my mind
Working away....
Falling behind ...........
I don't know how i feel, but its another side
A side
of me, i have yet to find
And this feeling i have, not
so blind
Consumed by thought, where is my mind
I cant help but think
I want her
By my side.....
Author's Note:
I cant get this girl out of my head.Awards
Comments on "Thinking Of You "
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A former member wrote:
I could feel your desire to her so genuine and raw. Great piece!
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A former member wrote:
There were a few grammar issues but other that this was an easy to read, easy to relate too poem that I feel was very well penned and emotional. I can tell that you wrote it from the heart, which is a very good thing!
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On Thursday, November 29, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...nice write. that uncertainty is a tough thing to be afflicted with...
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On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
first paragraph last word did you mean blur or the color bluer? very emotional write loved it.
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On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, gearhead
(19) wrote:
yup fixed it thanks for catching that, still fixing a few things i missed lol
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A former member wrote:
Very meaningful write, I love it. I can also relate; I understand that sort of suffering of always having that someone on your mind. True words, keep it up :)