Comments by The_Broken_Fox_2112
- "Again, I feel that some of your word choice would help the flow of the poem, as the rhymes seem forced or chopped. I watched a house burn down before, and it's a scary thing to see. Being the cause of it would probably make me feel much like this. I like your insight to the realistically tragic. Kudos."
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "Take Me" by horrorchantenshi
- "I really like this poem. People can be very mean an insensitive, especially during our younger years. I especially was fond of the line "I have all I got." That one really hit home. I hope to see more work of yours soon! Welcome to D.P! (If you need anything, don't be afraid to shoot me a mail or comment :3 )"
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "What they say." by horrorchantenshi
