Comments by whisperingwalls
- "I love your galactical imagery, normally larger themes and images come off as "too much" but the way this was written deals with them so nicely, agree with dwells, nicely done!"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Timid Galaxy " by serenesavage91
- "We tend to be our own worst critics, often what we see in the mirror is nowhere near who we truly are... with that being said, I've faced self issues and you can tell this is passionate poetry... The conflict, loathing, overcoming... you can tell its from the heart and not just bullshit."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Mirror" by serenesavage91
- "wow, there is something about this.. All of your imagery supports itself because it is so vivid.. there is real meaning behind the words... you can sense the passage of time, the darkening mood.. Like grey clouds overhead... Bravo"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Beauty in death and fear" by serenesavage91
- "What a sudden and shattering conclusion; the sudden longing and abandonment is crushing... I love your diction, you use unique words that entice the audience (very descriptive)... Tis always darkest before the dawn? :p"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Flying Above the Night" by serenesavage91
