Comments by whisperingwalls
- "for seven streams
you will be mine until I
am fucking sick of you
and I replace you
with:
violins and wine
normally poems and vulgarity don`t mix for me, but in this circumstance it gave the piece power and was in good taste. Love the refuge of violins and wine... It painted the picture of a late night trying to forget.. and thats what poetry is all about, a perspective. enjoyed this alot"
Posted by whisperingwalls on ".Unreliable Narrator ." by Corinthian