Comments by SilentStalker

  • "...maybe in time your invention will be the spark of an 'assault with a deadly weapon'...might want to hide the fact you thought it up by then... -Stalker"
    Posted by SilentStalker on " Spife Of My Dreams" by Munkey
  • "...sorry, buddy...I'm gonna have to knock you for repetitive rhyme...but on introducing a new subject...I don't think I've seen one displayed quite like this yet...dunno how good or bad that is...lol"
    Posted by SilentStalker on " Spife Of My Dreams" by Munkey
  • "...I'm wondering, what sort of sound would you have this going to...? I can fathom a few different possibilities for it; just wondered what you were aiming for..."
    Posted by SilentStalker on "Bury Her Deep" by Munkey
  • "...the second line is offbeat...how about 'I pray my soul for none to keep'...? and the same for the fourth line; just kill of the 'cuz'...not only will it give it perfect rhythm, but it just might appeal more to others..."
    Posted by SilentStalker on "Dying Man's Prayer" by Munkey
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