Comments by SilentStalker
- "*actually* ...all in all, you did rather well with it, and I think some people might get pissed off at me, because I rarely comment on works anymore; ah well, when i find writes that interest me, I comment..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Shroud of Darkness" by darth ren
- "...as for the poem, I must say that it kicks its own type of ass, as it appeals to me rather nicely; I also notice your use of language is more than just a few words, which I think is why some of us actual try to rhyme in the first place..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Shroud of Darkness" by darth ren
- "this works pretty well; the long lines sometimes let us lose track of the syllables we're using, but it also gives us the leeway to get away with it a bit easier..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Shroud of Darkness" by darth ren
- "... these formatted writes suit my reading preferences precisely, and have me hoping that the writer strives to make the next even more immmaculate than the last...very well done on this..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "A Bad Goodbye" by darth ren
- "...the rhyme is almost head on, which is good for us poets, and the rhythm is damn near perfect as well; I also niticed that you kept the actual story going well, even with the restrictions of a rhyme scheme..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "A Bad Goodbye" by darth ren
