Comments by haunted

  • "oh im sure you would cause traffic accidents with the dirty men looking at the beautiful woman behind the many fences she graces. I would smoke all damn day if you stood there long enough while the piano played the sweet music that follows you. I got a pleasant image from your words. but to be on the other side of the fence while nothing exists, can truly be you lost in its sound to the universe, if even for a moment. its possible to be immersed elsewhere when the mind is for the flow. awesome ana!"
    Posted by haunted on "catcher." by anaksunamun
  • "this is really kind of sad ana, maybe im looking into it to much but it seems you have sacrificed to something that may have died, but not in a physical sense. more of a feeling or emotion. and i say its sad because you have gone to great lengths to be with this person. maybe the seahorses dying were your way out and now you have no way out because of the sacrifice maybe. idk, but i find your poems are always fascinating and i love picking them apart, and even when im not even being close. its still an interpretation. and this is how i kind of read it, and this one has a depressive feel to it and its one of poetries finest. beautiful, just beautiful. "
    Posted by haunted on "_In" by anaksunamun
  • "this is like therapy with words, confirming that lifes little pleasures can at least for a moment make things go away. I think our thoughts, at least the negative ones can distract us with illusions. lifes little insignificant pleasures are vital to how we function. "let them have there trembling poinsettias and solitary sex if it makes them feel safe and brave." let me tell ya, I don't know about safe and brave but def distracted from the hallucinogens that seem to be mere distractions. I love self soothing. awesome ana!"
    Posted by haunted on "teddybears." by anaksunamun
  • "just fascinating ana, I love it when you post. your words for me would be very difficult to write and that's why im in awe and that's why I admire you so much. your so unique and a breath of fresh air that I inhale deeply. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "mcdonalds coke." by anaksunamun
  • "I love the way you think ana, your thoughts are like no other. im fascinated and shrouded in your mystery. I would love the unknown to be known, but I also thrive for the mystery and cryptic words that you speak. maybe unlock is the word im looking for. to unlock the secrets of your poetic mind. your amazing ana, and a favorite of mine. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "Electricity is Ahrimanic." by anaksunamun
  • "I would say that this is a match made in heaven for the eyes that see the same. for the color blind, a bond of teaching, a need to take a color at face value described by the eyes that see them. and to define such beauty to eyes who choose to remain blind, and for those who don't care to not want to feel and see these colors by your beautiful words, leaves them in a world where the colors are dull. you don't have to describe the beauty in colors to one who shares the same sight, because they already know of this beauty. awesome little piece ana. thanks for sharing!"
    Posted by haunted on "baal." by anaksunamun
  • "your words are haunting once again. your poems really leave a wonderful taste in my mouth when I read them. I also really think your poems are very unique and your a breath of fresh air compared to many poems because there is none like yours. there beautiful and filled with mystery. and I love that. awesome ana!"
    Posted by haunted on "167/99 ." by anaksunamun
  • "amazing ana, your words are written like cryptic spells from a book full of shadows. I read this several times and it just got better like fine wine to the lips. excellent poem my dear."
    Posted by haunted on "tinsel." by anaksunamun
  • "I just love this poem, sorry had to come back for your message in this. I love the honesty in your words. you may struggle but your still going to live like a queen. I love it!"
    Posted by haunted on "8.20 an hour " by anaksunamun
  • "and the mysterious shall be wrapped in darkness upon pages that are blessed with a writers love. you can take a subject, no matter how ugly and turn it into a beautifully dark poem, even with hope in the last sentence. you stand to be heard. your poems are just amazing. haha. your talented ana, and im already looking forward to your next post. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "8.20 an hour " by anaksunamun
  • "grrr, i meant unlock your mind, unlike wouldn't be good good, haha. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "." by anaksunamun
  • "so mysterious and so intriguing. i wish i could hear these words in my ears by your mysterious breath, to pick you apart and tear the petals off of you. your poetry is unlike any other and im fascinated by your words and how they leave me with the taste of enchantment. if only i could unlike your mind but then your mysterious poetry would only enchant. a very good poem ana. "crawling on cranberry walls". fucking beautiful!"
    Posted by haunted on "." by anaksunamun
  • "if I read this correctly, this is kind of sad. it sounds like memory or a distant memory of someone who has taken their own life. but I love this place, this gathering of the dead. I would hope that I will be drinking diamond champagne with the broken and lost souls. such a great image you painted, I love that thought. but it does have that despairing feeling of mourning in a sense. but what really summed it up is, "constellations to you, beloved". I loved this, a great piece and definitely awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "Belgravia Court " by anaksunamun
  • "haha I swear your words penetrate like nothing can. your poetry amazes me and what sets you apart from others is your very unique style. sometimes your poems, like this one, makes me want to run to a church and seek shelter. haha its just so potent. your words are fantastic, and I think you should write spells because thse leave me bewitched every time. im in love your poetry, I cant even say anymore with out falling all over myself. awesome!"
    Posted by haunted on "hungarian star" by anaksunamun
  • "whatever light scuffed vox winds I have caught are lost in window breaks. I had to come back to this....forgive and forget. I just love that, you have such a way with words. forgiveness to be given in the path of broken windows. cause now the problems over there, and no longer here. just beautiful."
    Posted by haunted on "ave maria " by anaksunamun
  • "this is absolutely amazing. im in love with the first line. that is some serious thinking into something so angry but so beautifully written. the rest reminds me of a bitter rage and the detail of your thoughts are like holy crap! its awesome, this is very potent. I feel for the person in your mind that inspired this. its almost a cryptic hex as I read it. but yeah, super good poem!"
    Posted by haunted on "ave maria " by anaksunamun
  • "your poetry is beautiful, its mysterious. and leaves me with the darkened smile I like to wear when the dark has finessed my ears and lips. you have a forked tongue and you speak in simple words that could bring hell to its knees. awesome poem!"
    Posted by haunted on "howl" by anaksunamun
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