baal.

By anaksunamun

 


































dark red. Not intimidatingly, just distinctly























imagine if everyone around you was color blind and mocked you for describing colors, but then one day another elegant being shows up that can also see colors.

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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Tuesday, July 1, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I kept thinking of "The Colour Out of Space" by Lovecraft, that maddening sensation where you see a color (or movement of color) that you're sure no one else has ever seen....it's always kinda .....so when someone else sees it is life-affirming, indeed.

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  • Magdalena On Friday, August 8, 2014, Magdalena (552)By person wrote:

    His problem is with himself ana, I would take no notice.... Thought provoking indeed, I often wonder about perception and maybe none of us see anything exactly the same, could never imagine being without colour but I do find black and white beautiful too... Shine on lovely lady. :)

  • haunted On Monday, June 30, 2014, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    I would say that this is a match made in heaven for the eyes that see the same. for the color blind, a bond of teaching, a need to take a color at face value described by the eyes that see them. and to define such beauty to eyes who choose to remain blind, and for those who don't care to not want to feel and see these colors by your beautiful words, leaves them in a world where the colors are dull. you don't have to describe the beauty in colors to one who shares the same sight, because they already know of this beauty. awesome little piece ana. thanks for sharing!

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