Comments by dwells
- "Impressed that you know how glue is made, and I feel the third stanza pretty much says it all, eloquently and completely. Sorrowfully wrought and solemnly profound, thanks Carmina."
Posted by dwells on "Penitential" by Carmina Gitana
- "Wow, metaphors within metaphors, marvelous. Stalactites and stalagmites can also join and create columns. Sensual and coming full circle at the ending, well done Carmina, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Pearl Grotto (v. 3)" by Carmina Gitana
- "The siren sounds quite sure of herself and must definitely know the hearts of men, great poem, pass out the ear plugs (HA)! Thanks Carmina"
Posted by dwells on "The Siren's Lament" by Carmina Gitana
- "To be the tenderness of one's brutality, now that is truly insightful, sounds like you are indeed "the better half" (but then many probably think the same thing too) - cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "I Am/I Miss You" by Carmina Gitana
