Comments by dwells
- "Hi Mona - let's see: Cain (murderer), Abel (slain), and later Seth (the baby) to take things literally with the closing. No guess here since they all qualify for different reasons. Nevertheless, your poem sets a fine stage of madness and elemental evil. A perfect piece for DP!
Noisy neighbors are a nuisance too :) Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Delirium" by Mona
- "Some thoughts on thoughts, though some come sleepily through that hollow spot. Well said Mona and each stanza was a unique vignette almost unto itself. Much enjoyed, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "A Dream Divined" by Mona
- ""The way backwards up the tree" - a terrifying proposition to which any cat can attest Mona. You really got into this as it progressed and picked up a momentum of it's own, well done!"
Posted by dwells on "Wicked Reverie" by Mona
- "Those wacky worms are insatiable Mona! This was a delicious depiction on the nature of Man perhaps, well done!"
Posted by dwells on "Resilience " by Mona
