Comments by dwells
- ""It's not me" I think was your intended last line (typo?). This was a well developed concept concerning internet relations we are all exposed to on a daily basis. Well done and thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Broadway" by pessum ire animus
- "I didn't read all of this because I couldn't help but think that they need you to give at the blood bank. You lose a pint and get the same rush or catharsis, with no mess and somebody else benefits too - win / win situation I'd think, no? Cutting reminds me of somebody dying by inches perhaps? Or in a self-punishment mode. Sorry, I just don't get it."
Posted by dwells on "Cutting - The Devil's Advocate" by pessum ire animus
- "Lovely ending and uplifting too. A couple typos in the last two stanzas detracted slightly, thanks for this offering."
Posted by dwells on "Three" by pessum ire animus
