Comments by dwells
- "Sounding a bit feverish and liked the play on words of the last line, thanks Cori."
Posted by dwells on "ill. " by Corinthian
- ""Rockabye baby, on the tree top..., when the bough breaks, the cradle will fall" - nicely done Cori."
Posted by dwells on "und nun . " by Corinthian
- "Not sure what I just experienced but it wrapped me up from the beginning and won't let me go: from the religious, to the profane, and the sensual - images uniquely you own, with a belly full of snow - cheers Cori!"
Posted by dwells on "decayed and demonically intelligent " by Corinthian
- "Looking for "glossaries" but I guess you already took it down, sadly..."
Posted by dwells on "gloss." by Corinthian
- "Would those be saddle shoes, or perhaps black patent leather -either way they both match the plaid, pleated dress with shoulder straps. Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "snob." by Corinthian
- "Hold back the morning while this night still lasts and I will reward you with a never-ending something...Sounds like unrequited love to me, cheers and well done, blue one!"
Posted by dwells on "Procuress Morriña" by Corinthian
- "You hit the nail on the head with the first and last minutes of sleep, that's when my muse is most awake. You are definitely into all things blue, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Nächtiges Elend" by Corinthian
- "Memories of a baby boy perhaps, sad and yet serene in the recollection, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "shimmer." by Corinthian
- "Sounds like a lament for the loss of leaving something behind and moving on, and as Nae said, the "attic" line was indeed epic, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "gloss." by Corinthian
- "Just enough Latin in my Spanish and scientific background to tantalize a very rough translation. The author's note was helpful too, much enjoyed and thanks."
Posted by dwells on "si linguis angelorum loquar" by Corinthian
- "Sounds like somebody is coming in as a lousy second place to a memory perhaps. Well written is sparse text but charged with emotion, cheers."
Posted by dwells on "blue salt ." by Corinthian
- "Recommend you read "A letter From Brooklyn" by Caribbean poet laureate Derek Walcott. It's aways a comfort to me in such times as you portray, thaks."
Posted by dwells on "Tenant les saintes " by Corinthian
- "A mother's lament for her lost child perhaps, or something about the sainted one? Not sure but grief and resignation seemed to predominate, cheers."
Posted by dwells on "Lourdes" by Corinthian
- "Your body (guessing at the title from my spanish background). Dracul in closing line was unexpected - perhaps Vlad the Impaler? Much to ponder, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "sui caedere" by Corinthian
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