Comments by dwells

"This makes me want to go to Wendy's right now and order a Grand Slam breakfast!. Sensuous and such a cosmic elegance portrayed in this piece. Great similie too, thanks and so well done."
Posted by dwells on "dinner at Wendy's 8.34 p.m." by nur hidayah

"Unusual message and loved the back-and-forth in the second verse. In a word "worry"."
Posted by dwells on "little ache" by nur hidayah