Comments by 10 Forty Three

"Another glimpse into the soul and mind of sTr8. I could feel the sorrow and longing in every line. - 10"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "-Until Next Time In The Universe-" by sTr8-jAcKeT

"This is definitely one of your more raw and vulnerable pieces. I know you explained in the Author's Note about when you wrote this but the line, "Deceiving those we do not know, to treat as if our brothers" makes me think of someone who is in the military, far away from home. A soldier reminiscing about easier times and having to hide how he truly feels inside around strangers who are in the same position as him. Beautiful. - 10"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "-Beyond The Past-" by sTr8-jAcKeT

"I kind of wish this one was longer so I could get longer lol. It was quite sensual and hot. W/d - 10"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "-Pull Your Hair-" by sTr8-jAcKeT

"This was a very touching tribute. If only wishes could be as powerful as memories. Rest In Peace to your brother. - 10"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "-Your Strength-" by sTr8-jAcKeT

"You have such a unique way of using adjectives and imagery to tell a reflective story. I really like that this poem can be interpreted differently depending on the reader. W/d. - 10"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "-Seated-" by sTr8-jAcKeT

"Not sure if I should feel bad for grinning but oh well. I enjoyed this piece. Nice one! - 10"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "-Little Mary Cindy Lou-" by sTr8-jAcKeT

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