Comments by OLd SouL
- "What a fun scamper through the stalks. How interesting our minds... can turn nature's field into a haunted house of sorts then back again. Great work! :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Cornfield Effect" by Mistress Morbid
- "It took me many years to learn this valuable lesson. There is a balance.. though tought to find. Its 'me first, you close second.' And a big middle finger for those who don't care. :) :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "I don't care anymore" by Mistress Morbid
- "This was very whimsical and beautiful.. I have a suggestion though... Around the middle of the poem, you started off two verses with the word Suddenly. Try not to use the same word repeatedly. Other than that small thing, I thought this was great :) :::OL"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Sleeping Beauty" by Mistress Morbid
