Comments by OLd SouL
- "Though I’m deep in the shallow waters- that spoke a few different meanings to me.. Lovely. :::OLd "
Posted by OLd SouL on "fix me" by Exodus
- "'we were all in love with dying' there was a line like that in that song umm "Pepper" by Butthole Surfers I think... Anyways.. great poem... I like the sugar melts- hot asphalt- crystal dissolves.. the feeling of it all. :::Old"
Posted by OLd SouL on "bleed the nectar x (decadence)" by Exodus
- "I love different parts of this..like 'Candle wax fires melt under the snow.
The bride of the buried lake' and '
The butterflies, tearing off their wings
Surrender to the blood born sky'... Morbid, yes.. good stuff, yes of course. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "asphyxia." by Exodus
- "I must say you have grown leaps and bounds. 'You and your pull-string heart
Scraped your knee on the sky
On your way down'. That was tight... Liked it all. :::OLd "
Posted by OLd SouL on "616." by Exodus
